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题目：As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work， job satisfaction is an important element of individual well-being. What factors contribute to job satisfaction?How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?
题干分析:本题是相对抽象的社会生活类话题，对于中学生以及没有上过班的大学生同学们有一定话题上的陌生感。但是即使是上班的“同志们”就一定觉得题目容易展开吗?是的，中国人的答案在面对这个题目的时候是惊人的相似，可以预见，大家的答案往往是：money, power, promotion。这些对于工作满意度的factors的回答本身是没有问题的，但是难点在于不要忽视了去解释和补充我们“为什么把这些元素”看的比较重的原因。回答的内容本身并不重要，但重要的是如何解释清楚。
Nowadays many adults (直接用adults 是细化思维的体现，不要只是写people,使句子更贴话题) have full-time jobs and the proportion of their lives spent doing such jobs is very high. (首句不要写太长的背景，要从第一句话就开始描述这个话题，而不是“with the development of society and economy , there is a hotly-debated topic about whether or not …这样的套话，是注定让你丢分的，接下来将变成一个考官验证5分或者5.5分的过程。那为什么不能写模板呢?这样的句子本身的质量不是很好?威廉老师告诉你，是因为背景写的太大，紧接着就跳入非常具体的话题，这样严重破坏了作文的CC(连贯性)这一评分标准)。 So feelings about one’s job must reflect how an individual feels about his or her life as a whole， and because of this， job satisfaction is indeed very important for the wellbeing of that person. (顺接的很自然)高手应该做到让段落的内容的话题的范文不要太宽，要尽量克制写很多内容的冲动。你有没有发现，当你从第一句就开始写这个话题，从写成年人的工作对于成年人很重要的前提下，自然就过渡到了“工作满意度“的话题，因为话题窄，所以很容易构成有逻辑)。
Employees get job satisfaction in a number of ways.(罗列式中心句，就表明接下来会有几个具体的方面需要具体展开) Firstly， a person needs to feel that they are doing valued and valuable work， so positive feedback from superiors is very important in this respect. A sense of fulfillment is also(also 体现递进，内在的逻辑) encouraged if a worker feels the job is worth doing because it contributes to the society or the economy as a whole. (先接结果后写原因是高分作文特征之一，这样能有效避免观点跳跃)Secondly， when someone feels they are improving or developing their skills through training opportunities，(很细节，并且符合逻辑的观点，也许没有工作经验的同学不能够想到) for example， then there is a sense of progression and purpose that rewards a worker. The sense of belonging to a team or a working community also(递进词，体现内在的逻辑) contributes to job satisfaction because colleagues help each other to enjoy their working lives.(先写结果，后写原因是高分作文的特征之一)Satisfaction is also increased by a sense of responsibility for and loyalty to a team.
该段落使用罗列式中心句，并且细化思维做的很好。在一个段落中就出现了：“valued and valuable work，positive feedback from superiors，A sense of fulfillment，contributes to the society or the economy，improving or developing their skills，training opportunities，a sense of progression and purpose，sense of belonging to a team or a working community，colleagues help each other，a sense of responsibility for and loyalty to a team 这样的10个对于factors 的具体回答，并且能够有效的能将这些细节名词进行有逻辑的串联的确是高分的作文的体现)所以观点本身并不是最关键的因素，比如中国人通常所认为的：A reasonable income is quite an important contributing factor because some basic survival necessities are highly prices such as housing, cars and dressings and the social welfare system is not fully accomplished. 只要解释充分，话题的答案本身就不是最重要的了。)
Of course not everyone enjoys their work. (直接式的中心句，直接对于第二个问题给予回答) Hard economic realities mean that many people have little choice in the kind of job they can get. (进一步解释)In some cases an employee is working in a job that suits neither their skills nor their personality.(分类解释)Some jobs are repetitive and boring，and labor relations may be poor and lead to resentment and insecurity rather than to job satisfaction. (进一步的细化思维)
优秀的英文段落结构就像“瀑布“一样，往细化的方向不断的展开，可以采取分组，解释等方法，先明确的给出”对于问题回答的中心句，即先写中心句，然后进行进一步展开的倒过来的细化展开的方式，而具有讽刺的是，中国学生的答案往往在段落的中间就开始不断的上升话题，从而产生很大的跳跃，习惯于用：which will contribute to …//Ving 上升主题，最终达到联系到了“推动经济发展，维护社会和谐”的最终主题( drive the economic development and maintain social harmony),殊不知，这样严重破坏了句子和句子之间的逻辑和连贯度。
However， even though it is unlikely that all workers do feel happy in their work， I think it is not unrealistic to promote more job satisfaction in any job.(典型的批判性思维的让步句型，有承上启下的作用。是8分作文最重要的特征之一，从而使句子衔接变得特别到位) If the factors identified above are implemented， then any job can be improved and more workers can feel greater degrees of job satisfaction. (批判性思维)。
总体点评：这是篇题目本身非常抽象的题目，经过作者的细化思维的一步步展开，让我们对于“工作满意度”这一抽象问题有的较为具体的认识，但更重要的是作者将每一个要展开的分论点都进一步的解释和分析是得到高分最重要的原因。另外最后一段(even though, it is not unrealistic 这样的批判性思维能极大的提高CC连贯度)。
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雅思作文5分如何达到
雅思作文的满分是9分，所以5分只能算是一个及格分数吧！那么达到这个分数难不难呢？下面就和的我一起来看看雅思作文5分如何达到？
Task2：
Nowadays， there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive developments. Some people think it is harmful to individuals and what extent do you agree or disagree？
如今，媒体报道的趋势更侧重于报道社会问题和突发事件，而忽视社会的积极发展。一些人认为这对于个人和社会都是有害的。你是否同意这种观点？
改前解析：
这是一篇媒体话题类大作文，题目类型为Opinion Question 观点型。
题目特点：一般此类问题问你是否赞同题目所表述的观点，赞同不赞同或者一部分赞同，都需要给出具体的原因和解释。
具体的构思流程，Vicky在往期推送：中已经提到，童鞋们可以再复习一遍哦！
下面我们来看一篇考鸭的范文，
擦亮你的眼睛来找茬吧！
考生范文：
The current phenomenon of media overly focus on reporting issues and emergencies rather than positive developmentshave turned the spotlight on whether it is a positive or negative me，this could be beneficial for individuals but might be harmful to society as a whole.
Receiving accurate information of emergencies and problems could give individuals warnings. For instance， informuion including environmental problems such as air pollution is vital to pass on to the public through media. Without such information， people might keep polluting the environment until there is no solution and the world would become unlivable. Besides ， delivering important emergency warnings in time could save people＇s lives. For example，in China， thousands of people evacuated in time before the flood came in June 1998 merely because tv and radios broadcasted the emergency warning the night before the flooding. Therefore， delivering information regards to issues and emergencies is beneficial to individuals.
However，media＇s overly focus on pmblems and emergencies could lead to panic and chaos in society. There is a board consensus that public panic could result in unnecessary catastrophic chaos in society. Take the incident in Wuxi China as an example. In July 2021， a reporter in a local TV station reported a story about how the local factory has polluted the water source by pouring toxic chemicals into the river. Overnight， all the bottled water in the supermarkets was cleared out by local residents. Some people， misled by the media and filled with fears， even started a fight with the others in a shop over a bottle of water. That incident led to twenty-five adults and one child injured. Later the government issued a statement indicating that the amount of chemicals poured in the river was so small that it could not cause any serious health damage to human bodies. Accordingly， it is the media which spreading rumors about emergencies and problems that could harm the society.
In a nutshell，delivering reports which focus on problems and emergencies could be advantageous to individuals， nevertheless， it could also be harmful to society as a whole.
你能找出几处错误？
你给这篇作文打几分？
下面来看看Vicky如何精改，
同学们不仅要注意识别丢分点，
还要学习和积累其中的高分表达哦！
精改范文：
第一段：
The current phenomenon of media overly ❶focusfocusing on reporting issues and emergencies rather than positive developments ❷ have hasturned the spotlight onwhether it is a positive or negative trend.主观点❸To me In my opinion，this could be beneficial for individuals but might be harmful to society as a whole.
错误：
❶动词形式使用错误，真正的谓语动词为 turned，此处应使用动名词形式。
❷该句的主语为the phenomenon，谓语动词应使用单数形式，改为has；
❸ To me 属于非正式的口语化用语，应改为正式性语言In my opinion；
亮点：turned the spotlight on 把焦点集中在......
重新改述了题目并明确给出了自己的观点。
第二段：
论点1Receiving accurate information ❶ofabout emergencies and problems could ❷givehelp warnindividuals and enable them to prepare ings. For instance，information ❸ includingregardingenvironmental problems such as air pollution is vital to pass on to the public through ❹the media. Without such information， people might keep polluting the environment until there is no solution and the world ❺ would becomebecomes unlivable.论点2❻Besides，In addition，delivering important emergency warnings in time could save people＇s example，in China， thousands of people ❼ wereevacuated（v. 疏散；撤出）in timebefore theaflood camehitin June 1998 merely because ❽ tvtelevisions and radios broadcasted the emergency warning the night before the efore，delivering information ❾withregard toissues and emergencies is beneficialto individuals.
错误：
❶ about用在这里更恰当。
❷ 原句过于笼统，改动后的信息更加具体和完整。
❸ 根据句意，regarding更为合适；
❹ the media特指的是一个集合名词，包括电视、报纸、其他传播信息的形式，应该使用冠词the；
❺ 时态要前后统一，这句前面用的是there is 为一般现在时，所以后面应该保持时态一致。
❻ besides 属于非正式用语，不适合用于学术写作中，应该为in addition；
❼ 根据句意，应该是“人被疏散”，所以增加be动词were；因为具体指的是1998年的一次洪水，所以用不定冠词a； 洪水等自然灾难来袭，用hit比较地道；
❽ 首先TV应该大写，其次在正式写作中，不应使用缩略简称等形式，应该使用书面语；
❾ with regard to 为固定搭配，adv.关于；至于；
亮点：考生在这段的论述结构值得各位考鸭学习。
整段围绕开头段的主观点展开，阐述了两个分论点并以具体例子加以证明，最后再次强调了自己的观点。
第三段：
论点1However，the media＇s ❶overly focusover-focus on pmblems and emergencies could lead to panic and chaos in e is a ❷boardbroad consensusthat public panic could result in ❸unnecessary catastrophic chaos in societypeople being injured or even the incident in Wuxi，China，as an July 2021， a reporter in a local TV station reported a story about how ❹ thealocal factory ❺hashadpolluted the water source by pouring toxic chemicals into the river. Overnight，all the bottled water in the supermarkets was cleared out by local residents（精彩句子） people， misled by the media and filled with fears，even started a fight ❻with the othersin a shop over a bottle of water. ❼ThatThisincident led to ❽twenty-five25 adults and one child ❾ being injured. Later，the government issued a statement indicating that the amount of chemicals poured in the river was so small that it could not cause any serious health damage to human bodies. ➓ Accordingly，it is the media whichspreading rumors about emergencies and problems thatcould harm thesociety.
错误：
❶ 前面为名词所有格＇s形式，后面应为名词性成分，而overly focus为动词形式，所以应改为over-focus；
❷ 词语混淆错误，很多考生都容易将一些形近词误用，再次提醒大家写作时务必要注意区别，拼写准确；broad consensus 是常用搭配，表示＂广泛共识＂的意思。
❸ 这一句与前面的句子太相似，语意重复，应该使用多样化的表达，进行同义替换；另外catastrophic chaos有“词语堆砌”之感，不是native speaker常用的地道表达，应改成具体生动的信息。
❹ 因为并没有特指某一家工厂，而且当地不仅一家工厂，所以是泛指，应使用不定冠词a；
❺ 该句是指过去的报道，根据句意应该使用过去完成时。
❻ with the others在这里没有必要，可去掉；
❼ that不太正式，并且在英语中一般常使用指示代词this来描述所说的事件，更加客观；
❽表示1-10的数字时，应该用对应的英语单词one-ten；表示11以上的数字直接用阿拉伯数字即可；
❾ being injured表示受伤这种状态；
➓ which在这里是多余的；另外这里并没有具体指一个社会，应该去掉定冠词the；
亮点：考生的观点比较全面，在之前的主体段中给出了自己的主要观点，同时在这段中也阐述了“不实报道会带来的问题”，并以生动的例子加以证明。段落中还有一些精彩句子值得模仿学习哦！
第四段：
In ❶a nutshellconclusion，delivering reports ❷whichthat focus on problems and emergencies could beadvantageousto individuals❸；nevertheless，it could also be harmful to society as a whole.
错误：
❶ 这是一个非正式短语，在学术写作中尽量避免使用习语和一些陈词滥调的表达。
❷ 关于which和that，非特殊条件下，中国学生一般习惯互换，但其实两者之间还是有使用差别的，用which时，表示你说的情况适用于你谈论的所有事物；而用that时，只适用于你说的一些事物；
举个栗子，
All Dalmatians（n. 斑点狗），whichhave spots， are good pets.
这个句子中，我们知道斑点狗都有斑点，这里用which表达适用于所说的事物；并且whichhave spots和主语用逗号隔开；
Dogsthathave spots are good pets.
这个句子就是特指有斑点的狗，所有用that表示部分情况，且与主语间没有逗号。
作文中，delivering reports 后面所说的情况是部分类型的报道，因此应使用that。
❸ 两种观点间应用分号隔开。
亮点：总结段很简洁并且全面，还使用了一些高分词汇。
Vicky点评：
亮点：
该考生的文章结构和对写作任务的处理还算恰当，大部分例子中的过渡性短语比较准确，清晰地表明了不同观点间的关系；
个别句子的表达也很出色，用到一些高分词汇，已经用绿色标注，大家可以借鉴学习。
主要问题是：
1.存在语法和词汇错误，包括时态、冠词、介词、谓语动词单复数、词语混淆等，
2.一些非正式用语错误，包括缩写、简称、俗语等，各位小伙伴在平时的写作练习中一定要注意检查纠错，切莫让这些小问题积少成多，导致严重扣分！
雅思作文：2021.3.17 第一时间评析
【考试题目】
News media are important in modern society. Why are they so important? Are their influences generally positive or negative?
【题目翻译】
新闻媒体在当代社会中很重要。它们为什么这么重要?它们的影响通常是积极的还是负面的?
【关键词分析】
media
media来源于拉丁语，是medium的复数形式。因此这个词在英语中大多是用作复数形式，是各种媒体的总称。具体包括：print media(平面媒体)，如newspaper, magazine;broadcast media(电波媒体)，如radio, television, 以及new media(新媒体)，主要指the Internet. 以上这些媒体又可以称之为mass media(大众媒体)。
news media
本文应当围绕新闻媒体来展开，不要提到媒体的娱乐功能。
【话题分类与题型】
本题是老题新出，与2005年6月25日、2009年3月5日、2009年8月22日的话题基本一致。属于“媒体与广告”类话题的“新闻与媒体”分支。媒体类话题在2021年共出现6次，这次是2021年首次出现，上一次出现是在2021年11月17日。
该题属于混搭类题型(原因+利弊分析)，兼备说明文和议论文的写法(与09年3月5日的题型一致)。混搭题型是近期说明文考察的重点，2021年共出现7次，而标准的说明文(问题+原因+影响+解决方法)仅出现4次，因此在写作的时候应当特别留意混搭题型。
【话题评价】
媒体与广告类话题共有“新闻与媒体”、“媒体审查制度”以及“广告”三大主题。本题在“十大话题万能分类题库”中属于母题，因此只要做好充足的复习准备，难度不大。
【类似话题】
1. Some people think that the news media nowadays have influenced people’s lives in negative ways. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (050625)
2. Newspapers have an enormous influence on people's ideas and opinions. Why is this the case? Do you think it is positive or negative? (090305)
3. News media is more influential nowadays. Some people think it is a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (090822)
【题型解析】
混搭题型主要有常见的几种出题方式：原因+利弊分析、原因+同意与否(针对题目中所给出的解决方法)、同意与否+解决方法。回答时一定要紧扣问题。
此题属于“原因+利弊分析”题型，也是混搭类出现最多的类型。这种题目在解答时要注意，第二问建议大家写成双边支持，即好处和坏处都有，这样一来观点容易构思，字数容易达到，二来考官觉得考生思维比较全面。
大家可以思考一下下面这道相同题型的题目：
Some employers think that formal academic qualifications are more important than life experiences and personal qualities when they look for an employee. Why is it the case? Is it a positive or negative development? (071013)
【解题思路】
本文建议采用五段式。正文分三段，分别交代原因、好处、坏处。
原因：信息化时代information era的到来和全球一体化globalisation的发展使得现代人越来越依赖于媒体传递的信息。
好处：新闻给人们提供了大量的信息。关于国家的政治动向、政策变化的报道可以指导个人和公司的发展计划、投资理财;天气预报、路况信息等为个人的出行提供了指导;一些针对社会弱势群体的社会新闻也唤起公众的同情心，使有困难的人得到社会的帮助。
坏处：有些新闻来源不靠谱，特别是网络媒体。由于人人都可以通过twitter之类的社交网站social networking site来传播信息，因此给谣言rumour的传播提供了可能。有些媒体受政党控制，因此传递的是一些带偏见biased的消息，公众无法客观地从媒体中获取真相。甚至有些无良记者unscrupulous journalists为了引起轰动sensation，通过捏造一些假新闻chequebook journalism来吸引读者眼球。
结论：国家可以出台相关的法律法规related laws and regulations should be constituted，媒体应该进行自我审查impose auto-censorship，来规范媒体和记者的行为。而公众应当有独立思考能力和批判性思维能力independent thinking and critical thinking ability，来辨别新闻的真假。
【参考范文】(仅供参考)
I think the news media mainly plays two important roles in modern society – providing information and influencing public opinion – and I think its influence is generally positive.
Obviously, the news media provides people with vast amounts of information in various forms. We can access it by listening to the radio, reading newspapers and magazines, watching television and by surfing the Internet. The ability to access news media is important for individuals and organisations because we make many decisions based on the news provided to us. Some of these decisions are mundane. We check the weather forecast to see whether we should take an umbrella to work. Other news, such as that about the business world, could influence whether we invest our savings in certain companies listed on the stock exchange.
The news is often presented to us in certain ways, using specific words to try to control our feelings and thoughts. This can be the main negative influence of the news media. Very often, the news media portrays people in simplistic ways, giving us some facts, but not the whole story. In the USA, some news media tends to support the Republicans whilst others tend towards the Democrats and the portrayal of individuals can reflect this. This is somewhat inevitable, because the editors, journalists and owners of the news media have opinions and biases. So, I think that it would be better if people checked news stories from different sources instead of only using one source.
Despite the fact that the news media can report events incorrectly or with bias, I think that the general influence on society is good. More factual information gives us the chance to make better decisions, both in our personal lives and in our working lives. (291 words)
【其它作文题目】
A类Task 1 Bar chart(静态)
The bar chart shows the average working hours of full-time workers and part-time workers in three countries and in Europe.
共有两幅柱状图，第一幅图对应full-time workers, 第二幅图对应part-time workers.每一幅图都有4组柱，分别对应三个国家：Greece, Netherlands, the UK，以及欧洲的平均值。每一组有2根柱，分别对应men和women.
注意：本图为静态图，主要涉及国与国之间的横向比较，不要出现上升、下降这些动态图的语言。另外，要注意数据的单位是hours，而不要写成百分比。两个图分开写，各分一段即可，先要写欧洲的平均值，再写每个国家具体的数值。还有一点提醒大家，图表中的UK在作文中要写成the UK.
【近期话题预测】
Task 1 仍然以数据图表为主，但是非数据图(地图、流程图)的警报至今未解除，所以仍应做好准备。
Task 2 以环保类、文化语言旅游类、犯罪类话题为主，适当兼顾教育类话题。具体的话题请参见“十大话题万能分类题库”。
以上就是2021年3月17日雅思写作评析的全部内容，后面还附有近期的话题预测，对大家后面的备考有一个提示和参考的作用。大家可以在备考后面的雅思写作考试的时候，进行适当的关注和练习之用。
雅思作文话题：年轻人
为了方便广大考生更好的复习，新东方在线雅思频道为大家准备了有关雅思考试 作文 话题：年轻人的内容，以供各位考生考试复习参考，希望对考生复习有所帮助。
雅思作文话题：年轻人
写作题目
Some people think that young people should follow traditions of their society, and others think that young people should be free to behave as individuals.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
题目大致意思：到底年轻人(1)是应该遵守传统，(2)还是可以被允许有自由的行为?
隐形模板：起3承6转6合3
起--允许年轻人自由取舍传统，视传统为历史的导师，而不是未来的狱警。
承--(舍其劣)年轻人自由抗拒不好的传统束缚，如此社会才能进化。
转--(取其优)全力保卫优良的传统价值，如此相传社会的 文化 遗产。
合--年轻人在行为上分辨理性的活传统与非理性的死传统。
IELTS Example Essay
Every generation, young and old, should be allowed freedom to deal with the breaking down of certain patterns and standards being handed down from the past. As individuals, young people are particularly keen to the need to end whatever tradition they think is unreasonable for the society. All rebellious minds think alike--tradition is a guide for the past but not a jailer for the future.
Too often young men and women are enthusiastic about the evolution of beliefs and practices of their society, and their behaviors tend to challenge a number of elements of tradition. For that matter, mental independence is required because without an amount of freedom, tradition would be only an explanation for acting in conformity without thinking independently.
Accordingly, young people ought not to be forced to express their new feelings in a mummified form, otherwise the evolution in tradition could not happen. The point is that not just because something is traditional, so there is reason enough to do it. It is good, however, for young people to continue a worthwhile tradition, and it is also good not to be captive of an unreasonable tradition which is not worth having. Although social bondage persists, it makes a difference if young people are permitted to think and act in such a way as different from that of a conservative mind in which the word 'tradition' means a shortcut to thinking or an excuse for acting.
Probably a society can only successfully function with traditional values--diverse customs, thoughts, lifestyles, religion, music, dance, arts and languages, among other things of culture. Young people had better learn that modern traditions are built on the past just as the past was built on the times that went before it. Traditions bring continuity to one's existence in a society, even though this sort of continuity is precisely what has been increasingly lost through modernity.
Thus, it behooves young individuals to preserve their traditions of value by safeguarding against the negative influence from various factors such as industrialization, globalization, and assimilation or marginalization of special cultural groups. It certainly makes patriotic sense that young people's love for traditions worth continuing always strengthens the well-being of the society and never weakens all that is meant to identify themselves with their country. Good tradition being a good guide, young people, however rebellious, should not be entirely negative about the past with all its enduring heritages and necessary evils.
In conclusion, since a modern society is not supposed to be a dead community, young people may behave freely in treating tradition as the living faith of the dead and not as the dead faith of the living. They should not believe in traditions simply because many beliefs and practices have been handed down for many generations, but should instead observe and analyze anything that agrees with reason and is conductive to the good and benefit of the society. It takes a lot of history to make a tradition, so the best of which must be accepted and lived up to, from generation to generation.
雅思大作文 范文 ：年轻人频繁换工作
2021年6月30日雅思写作大作文题目：An increasing number of people are changing their careers during their working time. What causes this trend and is it a positive or negative development for society?
6月30日的雅思大作文与本月7日的雅思大作文题目一样，主题都是年轻人频繁更换工作的原因及优劣势。这是一个大家都非常熟悉的话题，类似的话题曾经在2021年6月19日、2021年4月5日、2021年9月16日出现过。
在过去，更换一次工作是很难的，多数人都是在一个岗位上工作到退休，但现在刚 毕业 几年的年轻人如果没有换几次工作都会觉得自己吃亏了。那么，这到底是什么原因造成的呢?对于这种原因分析的题目，唐老师建议大家还是从三个层次(即物质层次、心理层次和社会层次)去思考，就容易把思路梳理得比较有条理。就年轻人更换工作而言
第一个理由肯定是为了挣取更高的工资，获得更好的发展机会;
其次，从心理上讲，很多年轻人愿意去尝试新工作，认为这样可以结识不同领域的朋友，增加人生体验;
最后，从社会角度看，由于服务行业的兴旺，电脑技术的发展，客观上也为年轻人频繁更换工作创造了可能性。
那么，频繁更换工作对年轻人来说是好还是坏呢?从好处上讲，这的确可以增加年轻人的工作经历，从而提高他们未来在就业市场上的竞争力，但也有坏处，比如无法在某个领域成为最顶级的专家，从而失去更多发展机会。
本题审题时，要专注两个关键词，即“年轻人”和“频繁更换工作”。以下是本题高分范文。
开头：
Not long ago, most people would choose to stay on the same job for the entire life, but today young people prefer to try different things and hop from one job to another.
不久以前，大多数人都会选择终生从事同一份工作，但今天的年轻人更喜欢尝试不同的事情，从一份工作跳到另一份工作。
解析：
(1) 本段直接进入话题，用过去和现在的对比来提出下文讨论的现象：年轻人不停更换工作。
(2) stay on the same job 坚持做同一份工作
(3) hop from one job to another 从一份工作跳到另一份工作
主体：
In my view, there mainly are three reasons why young people are doing so. At the most basic level, young people find that frequent job changing can often bring them the pay rise they expect. My friend Edward is a perfect example. As a program designer, he has worked for three different companies in the past five years, and now he earns almost five times as much as he did in the first company. This would not have been possible if he had not been mobile enough. The second reason is that by doing different jobs or careers, young people can increase their work experience and eventually become more versatile. This may give them a competitive edge, especially in today’s job market where an all-round employee is always preferred. Finally, changing jobs frequently nowadays has been made possible by the booming service industry and rapidly developing information technology and transport.
在我看来，年轻人之所以这样做，主要有三个原因。在最基本的层面上，年轻人发现频繁换工作往往会给他们带来期望的加薪。我的朋友爱德华就是个完美的例子。作为一名程序设计师，他在过去五年里为三家不同的公司工作过，现在他的收入几乎是第一家公司的五倍。如果他不是如此频繁地变动，那是不可能的。第二个原因是，通过做不同的工作或职业，年轻人可以增加他们的工作 经验 ，并最终变得更多才多艺。这可能会给他们一个竞争优势，特别是在当今的就业市场上，一个全面的员工总是被青睐的。最后，由于蓬勃发展的服务业和迅速发展的信息技术和运输，如今频繁更换工作已经成为可能。
解析
(1) 本段论述年轻人不停更换工作的三个原因，分别为物质原因(能挣更高工资，举例论证)、心理原因(增加工作经验+结果分析)，社会原因(服务业、信息技术和交通的发展)。
(2) at the most basic level 在最基本的层面上
(3) versatile 全能的
(4) give sb. a competitive edge 给某人竞争优势
(5) booming 蓬勃发展的
主体：
Needless to say, job-hopping may be a bad thing if it is not well-considered. Shifting from job to job may prove to be a waste of time and opportunity since this may easily make a person Jack of all trades and master of none. As we know, the person who can provide the most professional service for the company enjoys the best opportunity of promotion. However, if a person does not find the job he is doing interesting or fulfilling, then his change job could be a win-win strategy both for the companies and employees. For the companies, “new bloods” often mean stronger labor force and vitality of the staff. For the employees, a new job means a new opportunity.
不用说，跳槽可能是一件坏事，如果没有没有好好考虑的话。从一份工作转到另一份工作可能是浪费时间和机会，因为这可能很容易使一个人成为万金油，但一无所专。我们知道，能够为公司提供最专业服务的人享有最佳的晋升机会。但是，如果一个人发现他所从事工作没有意义或没有成就感，那么他换工作对公司和员工来说都是双赢的策略。对公司来说，“新血液”通常意味着更强大的劳动力和活力。对员工来说，新的工作意味着新的机会。
解析
(1)本段讨论改换工作的坏处(无法专门做好一件事情)和好处(摆脱自己不喜欢的工作)。
(2)jack of all trades and master of none 什么都会但什么都不专的人
(3)fulfilling 有成就感的
结尾：
In light of the above discussion, I would conclude that no change of jobs is wasteful as long as it is carefully considered. Holding on to a job that we do not like is a crime against our precious life.
根据以上的讨论，我认为只要仔细考虑，换工作是不会浪费的。坚持一份我们不喜欢的工作是对我们宝贵生命的一种犯罪。
解析
(1)本段是结论，明确提出自己的观点。
(2)in light of 依据
(3)hold on to... 牢牢抱住;坚持
雅思大作文真题 | 年轻人适合在政府担任要职吗?
雅思大作文题目
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Some people think young people are not suitable for important positions in the government, while other people think it is a good idea for young people to take on these positions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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本周写作的话题是：年轻人是否适合在政府担任要职?
有些人认为是可以的，有些人认为不可以，题目要求我们讨论双方观点，并给出你自己的观点。本题是2021年7月10日的原题再现(是不是太久远了?)，另外，2021年1月1日的考题(年轻人是否适合在机构担任领导?)也与本题非常接近。
年轻人是否适合在政府担任要职呢?这个题目当然应该关注“年轻人”、“政府”、“要职”这些关键词，应该讨论政府要职有哪些要求，年轻人有哪些特点，这些特点是否适合他们在政府中发挥作用，等等。注意我们在思维的时候不要过于复杂，要尽量简洁直接。比如政府要职的要求，如果要复杂地思考那就要考虑很多东西了(比如管理能力，正直，处理人际关系，素质等等)。我们要从众多思维中选择与年轻人相关的东西来讨论。
担任政府要职需要经验，这是年轻人缺乏的，因此年轻人不适合担任【反对】。
担任政府要职需要改变精神，这是年轻人擅长的，因此年轻人适合担任【赞同】。
我的观点：有些政府要职更注重经验，最好不要年轻人担任，但另一些要职更需要激情，年轻人完全可以担任【一分为二的结论】。
老师笔记
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As we can see on television, the important positions in the government are often held by gray-haired menand women. While it is assumed by many that the elderly people are more experienced and capable, I would say that some important government positions should also be open to young people.
我们可以在电视上看到，政府重要职位通常是由头发花白的男人和女人担任。虽然很多人认为，老年人更富有经验和能力，但我想说，政府的一些重要职位也应开放给年轻人。
解析
(1)本段为引入段，提出现象和自己的观点。
(2) gray-haired man 头发花白的人
(3) assume 假设，认为
(4) capable 有能力的
02
Undoubtedly, experience is of utmost importancefor many government positions. These positions have to deal with a great number of people every day and crisis may emergeany time. For example, a foreign affairs minister has to make quick responsesto the problems that may come from all over the world every minute. Without the rich experience collected from his long-time service in this field, it would be unlikely for him to fulfill his duties. Young people, therefore, are not really suitable for this type of government positions.
毫无疑问，对许多政府职位来说，经验是最重要的。这些职位每天必须与大量的人打交道，危机随时可能出现。例如，外交部长必须对世界各地每分钟可能出现的问题迅速做出反应。没有他在这一领域长期服务所积累的丰富经验，他不可能履行他的职责。因此，年轻人真不太适合这种政府职位。
解析
(1)本段论述某些政府职位需要经验，不适合年轻人，用外交部来举例。
(2) of utmost importance 极其重要 (= extremely important)
(3) emerge 出现
(4) response 反应
03
However, young people should be given the opportunity to hold those government positions which call formore passion than experience. Young people who are more open-minded and receptiveto new idea than the elderly, are more likely to solve problems in an innovative way, and to put theiroriginalideas into action, which may lead to unexpected benefits. As far as I understand, the national ministry of education as well as the primary schools and middle schools should be led by young people who are more inspiringand innovating.
然而，应该给年轻人机会担任那些需要更多激情而非经验的政府职位。年轻人比老年人更开放，更接受新想法，因此更有可能以创新的方式解决问题，并把自己新颖的想法付诸行动，这可能会带来意想不到的好处。在我看来，国家部 教育 以及中小学应该由更具启发性和创新性的年轻人来领导。
解析
(1)本段论述某些政府职位(比如教育部和中小学)应该由年轻人来担任。
(2) call for 要求
(3) receptive 包容的
(4) innovative 革新的
(5) original 新颖的
(6) inspiring 启发性的
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It is, therefore, difficult to draw a general conclusion about whether young people should hold important government positions. For some positions which are more experience-based, the elderly people are more suitable candidates, yet for other positions which require more passionate spirit than experience, young people can perhaps do a better job than their elderly counterparts.
因此，很难对年轻人是否应该担任重要政府职务做普遍结论。对于一些更基于经验的职位，老年人是更合适的人选，但对于其他需要更多的激情而不是经验的职位，年轻人或许可以比他们的老年同行做得跟好。
解析
(1)本段提出自己的观点：有些职位需要老年人担任，有些职位需要年轻人担任。
(2) candidate 候选人
(3) ounterpart 相对应的人(物)
雅思TASK2大作文模拟题:年轻人问题
要求：
Young people who are still at school often feel just as much stress as working adults. What are some of the causes of this stress, and how does it affect individual students?
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五个万能雅思写作话题及遇到奇怪话题该怎么办
今天洛阳大华雅思给大家分享五个万能雅思写作话题及遇到奇怪话题该怎么办。
一、教育
1、教育应该包括哪些内容?
母题：It is generally believed that education is of vital importance to the development of individuals and the well-being of societies. What should education consist of to fulfil both these functions? (050312)
提示：本题围绕教育的两大功能来展开(个人与社会)，准备好这篇文章，即可应付教育类话题中的最大分支—教育的功能，做到以不变应万变。对于社会角度，可以从促进经济发展、增加社会流动性(social mobility)、维护社会稳定这几个方面来展开，对于个人，可以写改变思维模式、有利于就业和便利生活来写。
子题：大学应当教授理论知识还是实践技能?大学的是应当把学生培养成合格的公民还是让他们自己得益?准备未来职业最好的方法是上大学还是尽快离校积累工作经验?大学要不要扩招?中学阶段应当提供通才教育还是专才教育?要不要延长义务教育年限?要不要让农村地区的学生更容易上学?老师要教学生如何判断是非吗?
2、学校的科目谁来选择?
母题：Some people think that the government should decide which subjects students should study at the university, while others think that students should be allowed to apply for the subject they prefer. Discuss the two views and give your opinion. (060916)
提示：这类题目采取的策略就是“双批判”，因为题目中提供的两种选择往往都是错误的。
子题1：政府选课or 老师选课?学生选择所有的科目or根据兴趣自行选择?
子题2：只有学术科目重要，体育和音乐这样的课不重要，你同意吗?要不要学国际新闻?要不要学历史?要不要中学阶段就学习外语?要不要学数学哲学这类的科目?
提示：子题2与母题联系不大，需要准备这些科目各自的优点。
3、什么样的教学方式最好?
母题：Many people use distance-learning programmes (study material post, TV, Internet, etc.) to study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the benefit as much as attending college or university. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? (041113, 081023, 100515)
提示：远程教育最大的好处，就在于三个any：anybody, anywhere, any time. 缺点是缺乏师生之间以及学生之间的interaction, 缺乏教师的moral guidance, 因为没有体育课且久坐电脑前，会引发健康问题。
子题：私立学校好不好?留学好不好?要不要分快慢班?小组学习还是单独学习好?
4、谁来为学费买单?
母题：Some people believe that university students should pay all the cost of studies because university education only benefit the students themselves not the society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (100731)
提示：这些话题都有一个共同的特征：高等教育只对学生自己有好处，因此学生应当自行为高等教育买单。这类题目的写法非常有规律，先驳斥这种理由，再交代学生自己支付学费的后果就可以了。
子题：政府要为学生买单吗?(缺点是给政府带来经济负担，这类话题写法和其它政府类话题一样)
5、孩子们要不要参加社会实践?
母题：Some school leavers travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages? (030308, 050514, 090926)
提示：gap year好处就是各种能力的锻炼，缺点就是容易受到社会恶习的影响，误入歧途。
子题：要不要参加无偿社会劳动?要不要毕业去农村锻炼?要不要从小远离父母居住?
6、家庭教育
母题：Some people say that children should obey the rules of their parents and teachers, while other people think children will not be well-prepared for their adult life if they are given too much control. Discuss in both sides and give your opinion. (041120, 100520)
提示：写一下各自的好处就可以了，最后的结论是早年的时候要教授他们明辨是非，对于做错的事情要惩罚，但是也要适可而止让其兴趣爱好得到自由发展。
子题：穷人家的孩子是否早当家?家长是否应该为五岁小孩的犯罪负责?要不要把小孩趁早送到学校去?老师对儿童的智力和社会发展所起的作用大于家长吗?同龄人压力(peer pressure)的利弊?
二、生态环境、自然资源与动物保护
1、动物需要保护吗?
母题：Now many people think that we are spending too much money and time on protecting wild animals. The money should be better spent on human population. Do you agree or disagree? (031213, 110709)
提示：这类题型采取驳斥的写法来写，先驳斥这是浪费钱，因为在动物上花的钱可以通过发展旅游业来得到补偿。然后再写动物保护的意义。
子题：要不要进行动物实验?要不要把动物关在动物园里?要不要吃动物的肉?人们可以采取什么措施来保护珍稀的动植物物种?
2、环境保护谁来负责?
母题：Environmental problem is too big for individual countries and individual people to address. In other words, we have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment is at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? (040228, 040515, 110507)
提示：不管题目怎么出，永远记得国际合作、企业、政府、个人，都可以为环境保护做出自己的努力。所以，你要准备的内容，就是以上四个方面可以做的事情。
子题：个人能不能保护环境?个人不能保护环境，只有政府大公司才能，同意吗?公司和个人，而不是政府，可以保护环境，同意吗?很多人知道环境保护很重要，但是自己却不采取任何行动，这是为什么?
3、垃圾问题怎么办?
母题：Many people say that we have developed into a “throw-away” culture, because we are filling up our environment with so many plastic bags and rubbish that we cannot fully dispose of. To what extent do you agree with this opinion and what measures can you recommend reducing this problem? (050806)
提示：这道题目应该围绕“一次性文化”产生的原因、后果和解决方法来展开。原因：对于方便、卫生的追求。后果：破坏水源、污染土地、污染空气。解决方法：三个R：reduce, reuse, recycle。
子题：消费品的增加会导致自然环境的破坏，原因和解决方法是什么?
4、自然资源如何保护?
母题：Fossil fuels, such as coal, oil, natural gas, are used in many countries. But in some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy, including wind and solar power, are encouraged. Is this trend a positive or a negative development? (090530)、
提示：这道题目问的是新能源alternative energy的优缺点。优点：取之不尽用之不竭inexhaustible，更环保environmentally-friendly, 缺点：核能nuclear power会引发安全事故，水能hydropower会破坏生态环境upset the ecological balance, 太阳能solar power 成本太高，风能wind power会产生次声波污染infrasonic wave.
子题：淡水资源如何保护?是什么原因导致了石油、森林和淡水资源的紧张，如何解决?解决环境问题的最佳方法是提高石油的价格吗?(此题已被剑8收录)
5、交通工具
母题：One long-distance flight consumes fuel which a car uses in several years’ time, but they cause the same amount of pollution. So some people think that we should discourage non-essential flights, such as tourist travel, rather than to limit the use of cars. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (060325, 080405)
提示：这道题目是经典老题，多次在雅思考试中出现。题目中的理由有明显的逻辑漏洞，因为飞机承载的乘客数量和行驶的距离要远大于汽车，因此先驳斥理由，再讲飞机被禁止的后果(旅游业，物流业将会遭到重创)就可以了。
子题：汽车会带来哪些问题?廉价航空是否应当被推广?
6、食品安全
母题：Some people support the developments in agriculture such as factory farming and creations of new types of fruits and vegetables, while others oppose this view. Discuss both views and give your opinion. (080712)
提示：工厂化农业factory farming提高了农产品的产量，但也祸害无穷。比如大规模喷洒化学肥料chemical fertiliser和农药pesticide，集中式养殖battery farming会侵害动物权利，也使得肉类安全受到威胁。转基因食品genetically modified food虽然改善了食物的品质和产量，但是破坏生态平衡，对人体健康构成潜在的威胁。
子题：长距离运输(空运)食品的好坏，科技改变食品的好坏。
注意：本题是一个边缘话题，不能完全归类到环保类下。比如长距离运输食品与全球化类话题可以结合，科技改善食品可以与科技类话题结合。
三、科技与发明
1、现代通讯科技
母题1：People can perform everyday tasks, such as shopping and banking as well as business transactions, without meeting other people face-to-face. What are the effects of this on individuals and society as a whole? (050226, 070331)
提示：这道题目是经典的科技类话题，因为这道“无脸化交易”的题目浓缩了网络购物、电视购物、网络银行，ATM自助银行、手机银行、电话会议、视频会议等多种话题，是大家必写的话题之一。
母题2：Many employees may work at home with the modern technology. Some people claim that it can benefit only the workers, not the employers. Do you agree or disagree? (050716, 091212)
提示：“远程上班”telecommute也是一个重点话题，对于员工和雇主当然都有好处。
2、现代媒体(电视、电脑、手机)
母题1： Some people believe that time spent on television, video and computer games can be valuable for children. Others believe this has negative effects on a child. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. (080110)
提示：这道话题涵盖了电视、视频和电脑游戏的好处与坏处，可以多练习。
母题2：There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. What forms do they take? Do you agree that the problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phones? (060114)
提示：这道题目是手机类话题的经典题目，从社会、健康、科技三个角度来展开，范围很广。
子题：要不要鼓励儿童看电视?看电视和玩游戏对小孩、家庭和社会有什么影响，怎样解决?电脑不能帮助儿童学习，只会造成身心伤害，你同意吗?如何鼓励老年人使用手机和电脑?手机对于个人和社会的好处与坏处是什么?
3、替代类话题
母题：Some people think that the government should establish free libraries in each town. Others believe that it is a waste of money since people can access the Internet at home to obtain information. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion. (120212)
提示：这道题目入选母题是因为它结合了科技、文化和政府三大话题，非常值得一练。不过考虑到2021年1月12日刚刚考过，最近几个月再考的概率不会很大了。
子题：图书馆要不要提供高科技媒体诸如电脑软件和DVD?网络是否会取代博物馆和美术馆?手机和电脑正在逐渐取代书信，你同意吗?机器(机器人)取代人类工作，利弊如何?网络教育是否会取代传统课堂?(提示：这部分话题与教育类话题结合，已被归入教育类)
4、其它科技话题(与社会、生活类话题结合)
题目：飞机旅行只对富人有好处吗?现代科技使人们失去创造力吗?科技发展造成负面影响了吗?科技发展是否拉大了贫富差距?早起的科技是否比现在的科技影响更大?科技改变了人们之间的关系了吗?科技造成环境污染/使我们的生活变得更加复杂，我们是否要告别科技，过简单的生活?
提示：对于拉大贫富差距这个话题，可以网上搜索一下digital divide这个关键词。
四、媒体与广告
1、新闻与媒体
母题：News media is more influential nowadays. Some people think it is a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (090822)
提示：之所以选择这道题目做母题是因为它涵盖的范围最广，可以写报纸、电视、网络。围绕这些媒体的好处和坏处写一篇文章，顺便思考一下下面的几道子题，那么这部分的话题就可以搞定了。
子题：报纸要比其它媒体更有影响力，你同意吗?网上的信息不准确，你同意吗?我们是否应该相信记者，一个合格的记者应当具备什么样的品质?
2、媒体审查制度
母题：Nowadays, films and computer games containing violence are popular. Some people think those films and games have negative effects on society and should be banned, while others think they are just harmless relaxation. Discuss both views and give your opinion. (111029)
提示：这道题目正好概括了媒体审查制度赞成者和反对者的观点。好处是对避免青少年的模仿，降低社会暴力，坏处是破坏了影片的娱乐性，对于新闻的审查则侵犯了人们的知情权和媒体的言论自由。
子题：政府应该控制电影和电视中的暴力来降低社会中的犯罪，你同意吗?要不要严格控制媒体对于犯罪细节的报道?电视节目向公众展现灾难性的画面对个人和社会有何影响?
3、广告
母题：We are surrounded by all kinds of advertising, which significantly influence our lives. Do the positive effects of advertising outweigh its negative effects? (041016, 110625)
提示：这道题目是广告类话题中最经典的，因为这道题目的范围最广。这道题目写成双边，好处是给消费者提供信息，促进经济发展，带动就业，坏处是欺骗误导消费者，误导儿童模仿，扰乱生活。
子题：广告是否会扼杀个性，使人们看起来都一样?针对儿童的广告有何利弊?针对儿童的广告是否应当被禁止?广告应当被禁止，因为它只有坏处没有好处，你是否同意?
五、政府与城市化
1、个人与政府
母题：Some people say that it is the responsibility of individuals to save money for their own care after they retire. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (070825)
提示：关于政府与个人这类话题，肯定是些政府和个人都应当分担责任。
子题：政府要不要为个人的医疗和健康买单?个人不要向国家缴税，你同意吗?公民除了纳税以外还有别的方法来尽社会责任吗?捐助是应该直接捐助给当地社区，还是给国家和国际性慈善组织?人们是否只应当关心当地和本国的人，而不是整个世界的人?
2、政府应当投资吗?
母题：Some people say arts such as music and painting cannot directly improve the quality of people’s life, so the government shouldn’t put money on art such as music and painting, instead, they should spend more money on construction of public services. Do you agree or disagree? (040626, 041127, 070920, 110611)
提示：政府投资类的话题几乎全都是交叉类话题，分别与教育(谁应该为学费买单)、艺术、科技、健康等话题结合。这类题目的写法大同小异，好处就是围绕各自的交叉来写，如促进教育、艺术、科技的发展，促进公民的健康，等等，而坏处都是一样的：浪费政府的有限的财政lavish the tight budget of the government，或者说给政府造成了沉重的经济负担impose a heavy financial burden on the government.
子题：政府不应当投资修建剧院、体育馆，而是医疗和教育，你同意吗?艺术家应该是政府资助，还是其他来源资助?政府应当资助本土电影吗?科学研究应该被政府而不是小公司来进行，你同意吗?体育队应该由政府还是非政府来源来赞助?个人健康是否应当由非营利性公司来运营?政府应当投资修建道路吗?举办奥运会的利与弊?
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