想要体高英语作文写作水平在原有的基础上进行修改提升是非常有效的办法，下面我就跟你们分享下怎么修改英语作文   　　一、英语作文的等级   　　四档文：内容不完整，语言表述错误很多，不能完整地表达思想。可得0-2分   　　三档文：内容完整，重点描述合理，但表述不充分，层次结构不合理，语言不够流畅，字迹不够工整，5-6  处语法或拼写错误；字数不足。可得3-5分   　　二档文：内容完整，重点描述比较充分，层次结构比较清晰，语言比较流畅，字迹工整，有3-4处语法或拼写错误；字数符合要求。可得6-8分   　　一档文：内容完整，重点描述清楚、合理，表达充分，层次结构清晰，字迹工整，可读性强，语言流畅，仅有1-2处语法或拼写错误；字数符合要求。可得9-10分 　　二、英语作文修改案例   　　案例一：   　　A Trip to the Zoo   　　原稿：   　　Yesterday way Sunday and it was a fine day.So I take a trip to the zoo. I went there by bus, I get there at 8:00 am.There are many people.and some people watched the tigers ,some watched the monkeys, Others watched the bids,I saw many animals and I tool many phtos. That’s a interesting trip. I’ll never forget it. That’s  my trip.   　　修改后：   　　It was a sunny Sunday  After a quick breakfast , I couldn’t wait to get on the bus. This is my first time to enjoy a trip alone. Varions lovebal animals are waiting in the zoo!   　　As soon as I got there,  I was attracted at once.  Monkeys were climbing in the tree happily. Sometimes they even came to fetch the bananas in visitors’hands. How naughty they were! What’s more, I was also intersted in the tigers. They are called “the king of animals”,but at this moment they were lying quetly ,maybe they were sleepy. Animals ,humanbeings ,we live in a world .we are family . I t came to my mind immiediatly.   　　Anyway, I had an interesting trip today . It gave me a deep impression, I’ll never forget it.   　　案例二：   　　My favourite season   　　原稿：   　　There are four seasons in a year. And my favourite season is summer. Although it’s very hot. I still love it .Because I can swim in the sea .And lie in sun . That’s very comfortable.And I also can eat some Icecreams.they are delicious so there’re lots of thingd to do in summer. That’s  very intersting. So I love summer. That’s my favourite season.   　　修改后   　　My favourite season   　　As is all know , there are four seasons. Speaking of my favourite , summer comes first although it is hot.   　　Many things can be done in summer such as swimming in the sea, Lying on the beach  … How comfortable ! More importantly  I can eat delicious Icecream . Of course, we also enjoy beautiful views outside. And I’m always looking forward to going fishing with my father .   　　In a word ,summer is my favourite season because it brings me a lot of happiness .   　　三、英语作文修改的注意事项   　　1、整篇文章逻辑的修改.作文的目的是为了表达东西,所以首先要确保作文表达的内容是清楚并且符合逻辑的,如果段落之间都是矛盾的就说不过去了.   　　2、语法的修改篇章与段落的修改过后看句子的结构,说仔细了就是语法的修改.   　　3、还有就是单词拼写等小细节的修改了.

I believed (改成believe)（这里加一个that）radio has continued to be popular in the age of television.
we have to admire (这里加一个that) the television can see and listen(改成watching and listening).uesing television is more convience and clarity.（改成逗号）but it is harmful for your（改成our，与前面we一致） eyes.
when you are tired.you can open the radio,listen （改成listening）（加to）the music and（加then） go to bed.It is very comfortable.
With the developing （改成development 有名词形式的动词我们不用分词结构）of the society,it is very important for us to（加know） how to get （加the）latest information.the radio is very small.you can take it in any case.if so,you can also quickly learn about the world by it.
what is more.when you （加are）use（改成using） it,it don't infect your work on your hand.you can save your time.
above all,the radio also still is popular（改成the radio is still popular）

so many mistakes!! uncorrectale!

today
is
very
hot.
my
best
friend--lily
went
to
the
pool
with
me.
the
pool
was
big.
lily
is
very
good
at
swimming,
but
i
can't
swim.
she
taught
me
some
basic
movements.
then
we
played
the
ball
game,
it
was
so
fun!
after
that
we
had
some
orange
juice,
it
was
so
delicious!
today
was
such
a
fun
day,
i
enjoyed
it
very
much!
里面得时态你要多加注意
既然第一句
你用了went，以后都要用过去式。还有，说英文不要太拘谨，也不要直接中翻英。你就按照我这个改。。准没错！

1、but I have sone ideas 一些 是some
2idea是想法；主意；概念，构想，意念
ideas 最好换成suggestions建议
3、 help To do note to learn and learn Chinese first class 你想表达什么？我不明白，你可以说 may help you learn Chinese better.
4、read magazines 不能用look at
5、to learn more words and the meaning of it好啰嗦，直接写 to learn more words 就可以了
6、possibly also with Chinese people to talk to这句话你是想表达尽可能多地与中国人交谈吗？那就说talk with Chinese people as much as possible.
7、 and let him guide you, and do not understand 连词过多，前面一个and去掉
8、do not understand and asked, can write and ask me是什么意思？不要理解和问，可以写和问我……改一下吧……if you do not understand ,you can write and ask me, I will help you.如果你不理解，你可以写信来问我，我会帮助你的。
9.Do as I say the words 去掉 the words
10、you Chinese should be no problem你的中文应该没有问题。你的中文应该是your Chinese啊

我的评价：这篇作文有点中式英文CHINGLISH,就是看起来是凑词凑起来的，有点啰嗦的感觉。
有些小细节要仔细一点~~~~~~

Dear Linda,
I'm very glad that you'll come to China to watch the Oiympic Games.I know it isn't easy to learn a foreign language ,but I have some ideas that may help
you learn and learn Chinese first class, open your mouth to speak more and practice more, listen more about the Chinese language program and follow it, it seems to me that this will be of great help. You can also look at some Chinese magazines to learn more words and the meaning of it, possibly also with Chinese people to make a dialogue, and let them guide you, if you did not understand it and just ask them,absouletly you can write it and ask me. Your chinese will be better and better.
Best wishes and looking forward to meeting you in China.

第二行“sone”改为“some",help后加you
第三行改为First do note carefully in the class,open you mouth and practice more as ofen
第六行“and do not understand and asked,can write and ask me.”改为if you don't understand youcan write and ask me
第七行Do as I say the words, you Chinese should be no problem改为Do what I say ,you will have no problem in Chinese

do note改为make note look at改为 read you chinese改为your chinese 大哥，确实写的不咋的啦，

Dear Linda,
I'm very glad that you'll come to China to watch the Oiympic Games.I know it isn't easy to learn a foreign language ,but I have some ideas that may help.
To learn Chinese , opening your mouth to speak ， making practice more and listening to the Chinese programes are the very important way to make progress. And follow what the people say on the TV.It can improve you pronunciation.You can also watch some Chinese magazines to learn more words, even then talk with Chinese people .And regard him as a guide for you, If you do not understand or have some trouble, you can write to me. Just do as what I have said ,you will realize that Chinese is a funny language and easy to learn it.
Best wishes and looking forward to meeting you in China.
Yours,
Li Hua

改好了，记得采纳嘿..

Compared with some western countries, China is indeed performing worse than them in evaluating a student's ability.

个人觉得应该用Comparing ，主语China 与compare 是应该主动的关系吧

Those who have a good memory may get a satisfying mark.

主语是复数，后面的宾语最好用复数吧

Those who have good memories may get satisfying marks.

Second最好改成Secondly 用副词做状语更好一点

Also, the college entrance exam may initimate the students into cramming.

这句话的主语与谓语动词不一致，应改成

Also, the college entrance exam may initimates the students into cramming.

或者Also, the college entrance exams may initimate the students into cramming.

there is more or less fortune, or more exactly, inaccuracy in one exam.

这句中的exactly用错了，应该用一个名词和fortune，inaccuracy对应

The people who are admitted to colleges were regarded as the "fortune-favored" children.

这句话的时态有问题，are 和were用在一个句子中是不是矛盾了，我看你整篇文章都是现在时，

这句话最好改成

The people who are admitted to colleges are regarded as the "fortune-favored" children

追问：
不敢苟同。

1，不知道看哪本书上面写，secondly是用在非正式的文体里。

2，Also, the college entrance exam may initimate the students into cramming.

may后面应该用动词原形啊，没错啊。你反而改错了吧。

3，there is more or less fortune, or more exactly, inaccuracy in one exam. 这句的意思是：多多少少，在考试中都会存在运气，或者更准确地说，不准确。

写字写得好丑