Dear Mrs. Smith,
I’m Li Hua, Chair of the Student Union of YuCai Middle School, which is close to your university. I’m writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest to be held in our school on June 15.

It will start at 2；00 pm and last for about three hours. Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic “Man and Nature”. We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. Please call me at 44876655 if you have any questions.
I am looking forward to your reply.
With best wishes
Li Hua

Jiangsu:

Dear teachers and schoolmates, it’s a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you. I’m interested in English, and hope to be an interpreter in the future. Naturally it’s very important for me to learn English well. As everyone knows, vocabulary is an important part of language, just like bricks in a building. I usually memorize twenty new words a day and put them to use whenever possible. After class, I often listen to English programs on TV and on the radio. Besides, I’ve learned a lot from the Internet and other sources.

Now, I’d like to make some suggestions on English teaching and learning in our school. Firstly, we should be given more opportunities to use what we’ve learned in order to have a better grasp of it. Secondly, I hope our teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines and give us more free time to read them. Finally, I suggest we have more English activities, such as English contests and festivals.

Thank you for you listening.

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2004高考英语满分作文
　　【全国卷I】
　　【试题回放】
　　假设你是李华，你在报上看到北京电视台今年七月将举办外国人“学中文，唱中文歌”才艺大赛。你的美国朋友Peter正在北京一所大学学中文，你觉得他应去试一试。请按以下要点给他写信告知此事，并表示可以提供帮助。
　　比赛时间：7 月18日 。报名时间：截止到6月30日。报名地点：北京电视台
　　注意：1.词数：100左右 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3.参考词汇：才艺大赛—talent show
　　Dear Peter,
　　I read in a newspaper today that a “Learn Chinese, Sing Chinese Songs” Foreigners’ Talent Show will be held in Beijing Television Station on July 18. I know you like singing, and you are in Beijing during that period. I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent, and how well you’ve learned Chinese. If you would like to try, you' U have to go to the TV station to sign up before the end of June. If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help.
　　Yours,
　　Li Hua
　　[名师点评]
　　从整体上说，本文书写得简洁明快。语言简单平实，要点囊括齐全，结构完整。本文的主要特点是让步状语从句的使用，最后两句话，采用了if引导的让步状语从句，结合将来时使用。
　　【全国卷II】
　　【试题回放】
　　假设你是李华，加拿大一所学校将于今年暑假组织学生来你校访问。其间，Andy Smith将借住你家。请你代表全家写信给Andy，欢迎他的到来，并告知有关事宜。信的要点如下：
　　1. 上午：学校活动2.下午：游览市区3. 晚上：看电视，玩游戏，聊天
　　注意：1. 词数：100左右2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯3. 参考词汇：安排arrange
　　Dear Andy,
　　I’m so glad that you’ll be here with me and my family for the summer holiday. I’m writing to express our warm welcome and introduce the activities during your stay here.
　　In the morning ,some activities at school will be arranged. You’ll visit our classrooms, reading rooms, labs, and so on. We’ll take this opportunity to exchange our views, talking about school life, and so on.
　　In the afternoon, you can tour around the city. And I’ll act as your tour guide. Our city has changed a lot and takes on a new look. You can see what is our city like with your own eyes.
　　At night , we can watch TV, play games and talk about what we’re interested in. I’m sure you’ll enjoy yourself. I’m looking forward to your coming.
　　Yours sincerely,
　　Li hua
　　[名师点评]
　　本文行文自然流畅，文章要点齐全，意思表达真切。详略得当，重点突出。从语言使用的角度来说，不但使用了一些生动的动词，准确的名词，同时为了使本文串联自然，又使用了时间状语为连接词，将文章按照时间顺序叙述完整。
　　[浙江卷]
　　【试题回放】
　　假设你是李越,你的加拿大笔友Steve来信说,他和他的一些同学正在学中文,请你推荐两本学中文的词典.根据下表提供的信息,请你给他写一封回信.
　　英汉/汉英词典新华字典
　　收词(字)18,000(英语)
　　20,000(汉语)10,000
　　价格52元11元
　　特点大量例子、用法说明,适合初学者中国最常用的汉语字典
　　参考词汇:
　　· 推荐 recommend (V.)
　　· 英汉/汉英词典 The English-Chinese Chinese-English Dictionary (ECCED)
　　· 新华字典 Xinhua Dictionary (XD)
　　Dear Steve,
　　I’m so pleased to learn that you and your classmates are learning Chinese.
　　I’d like to recommend the following two dictionaries.
　　The English-Chinese/Chinese-English Dictionary is really a good one for beginners. It has 18,000 English words and 20,000 Chinese words. Besides plenty of examples, it has many notes telling you bow to use a word. Xinhua dictionary is the most popular Chinese dictionary , and it has a vocabulary of 10,000 words. It may also be useful to some advanced learners of Chinese. Of the two, ECCED is the more expensive, costing 52 yuan, and XD costs 11 yuan.
　　Please let me know if you want me to buy these dictionaries.
　　Yours,
　　Li Yue
　　[名师点评]本文要完成的是书信的主要部分，因此不需要注意格式，但是不能遗漏要点。本文要点齐全，内容完整，详略得到。介绍的时候，层次清晰，逐一举例。文章流畅而连贯。有很多关于词汇和字典的表述，值得我们积累。
　　[广东卷]
　　【试题回放】假设你是下图的李华。请根据图画所提供的信息，写一篇英语作文，描述昨天晚上邻居看足球赛影响你学习的情况，并描写你随后与邻居交涉的过程(如：你向邻居提出要求，对方向你表示歉意等。)
　　注意：1. 词数：80—120
　　2. 可以编写对话或其它叙述方式描写你与邻居的交涉过程
　　About 9 o'clock last night, I was doing my homework. Suddenly I heard my neighbor shouting and laughing loudly. He was watching a football game on TV. I couldn't go on studying and became impatient. I covered my ears, trying to keep the noises out, but failed. So I had to go my neighbor.
　　I knocked at his door and said," Good evening, Mr. Yang! Could you please turn down your TV a bit? I am doing my homework.'
　　“Oh, I'm really sorry to have disturbed you. We'll do as you say.” My neighbor said politely.
　　“Thank you very much..” I said and went back to continue my study.
　　[名师点评]
　　这篇文章从整体上来看，内容完整，要点齐全。在准确领悟题意的基础上，用平实的语言，将文章娓娓道来，连贯而流畅。句式搭配长短结合。文章对对话的描写，很生动，让人有种身临其境的感觉。
　　【英语各档次的给分范围和要求】
　　第五档(很好);(21-25分)
　　1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。
　　2. 覆盖所有内容要点。
　　3. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
　　4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。
　　5. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
　　6. 完全达到了预期的写作目的。
　　第四档(好)：(16-20分)
　　1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。
　　2. 虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。
　　3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
　　4. 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。
　　5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
　　6. 达到了预期的写作目的。
　　第三档(适当)：(11-15分)
　　1. 基本完成了试题规定的任务。
　　2. 虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。
　　3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
　　4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。
　　5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。
　　6. 整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。
　　第二档(较差)：(6-10分)
　　1. 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。
　　2. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。
　　3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
　　4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。
　　5. 较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。
　　6. 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
　　第一档(差)：(1-5分)
　　1. 未完成试题规定的任务。
　　2. 明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。
　　3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
　　4. 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。
　　5. 缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。
　　6. 信息未能传达给读者。不得分：(0分)

高考英语满分作文

作文题目

假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。

注意：1.词数：100左右：

2.参考词汇：房租—Tent(n.).

I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.

Hope you will come here soon!

All the best!

Yours,

Li Hua

满分理由

本文格式正确，意思表述完整，行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用，还使用了以‘which，’引导的非限定性定语从句，从而使文章层次分明，富于变化，不愧为考场佳作。

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Dear Bob,

Welcome to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you.

I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School. It is on the third floor and there’re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.

Also from this house you can get to your school easily. Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. It is only one stop. At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I’U be able to meet you at the airport, see you.

Best wishes !

Yours,

Li Hua

满分理由

本文格式正确，内容完整，表述清楚，衔接紧密流畅，时态语态使用准确，特别是结尾末段适度的发挥，既充实了内容，又符合逻辑，成为本文与众不同的亮点。

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Dear Bob,

How are you these days?

I’m so glad to know that you’ll come to our city to learn Chinese. You asked me to find a place for you. Now I’ve found one which I think is pretty good. The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop. It’s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.

There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable. By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope you’ll like it. If not, I’ll try to find another place for you.

Yours,

Li Hua

满分理由

本文内在逻辑性很强，由远及近。由外及内，层次分明，错落有致。同时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处，很出彩，再则结构完整，从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备。

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作文：

Dear Bob,

I’m glad to hear from you.

Welcome to our city in september. I’ve found a suitable house for you.

The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the Jianxin Chinese School. If you take the No.11 bus, it is just one stop.

It is a flat on the third floor of a building. It has three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen. You can cook yourself. The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you. In the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair. The desk is next to the window. It will be good for study. The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month.

Will you be satisfied with this flat, or you want another one? Just let me know. I’ll try my best to help you.

Yours,

Li Hua

满分理由

本文内容详实，描述具体细腻，用词适当准确，如“suitable house”、“not far from’’等，另外文中的选择疑问句也很有新意。

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2009年5月1日世博会志愿者招募仪式正式启动，志愿者是办好世博会的一支重要的工作力量。另外，志愿者或做家教，教小孩子阅读、算术，或打扫公园与街道，或到医院或疗养院帮忙。你愿意做志愿者吗?请陈述理由写一篇100字左右的短文。

One possible version

I would like to be a volunteer in my spare time. My reasons are as follows:

First of all, it is a good virtue to help others, even in modern society. We all need others’ help in case we get into trouble. Secondly, we are able to better ourselves by helping others because we gain valuable experience and build up our confidence while serving others. What’s more, volunteering makes us feel better about ourselves, thus making our life more enjoyable. More importantly, we can make the world a better place to live in by volunteering to improve it.

In summary, volunteering can make a difference to our life, so I think it is very rewarding to be a volunteer.

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不同人都有着不同的习惯，个人习惯直接关系着公共卫生。请根据下列要求，写一篇120字的英语短文，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

1. 介绍有些人不同的好习惯和坏习惯。

2. 习惯与卫生的关系：习惯是卫生基础; 不好的习惯，会导致一些传染疾病传播，如AIDS，SARS， H1N1流感等。

3. 你的看法……。

One possible version

It is generally believed that different people have different habits. Some people are addicted to habits like drinking and smoking, while others pay special attention to healthy diet and never taste things like alcohol and cigarettes.

It goes without saying that there is close relationship between personal habits and public health. On the one hand, good habits serve as the necessary basis of public health, that is to say, without good habits, public health can’t be guaranteed. On the other hand, infectious disease is the natural result brought by dirty habits, like AIDS, SARS, H1N1 flu and so on.

Personally, I think it is high time we placed emphasis on improving personal habits and public health. If we mind our manners and behave ourselves well, there must be a bright and encouraging future.

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假如你是李华，你学校内有人得了猪流感，正在接受治疗，你校学生非常害怕，请你写一篇短文谈谈如何预防猪流感?

1. 平时外出戴口罩，少去人群集中的公共场所, 避免接触病人等。

2. 勤洗手，保证充足睡眠，多锻炼多运动等。

3. 词数: 120字左右

4. 文章的开头已给出, 不计入总词数。

参考词汇: 猪流感swine flu; 口罩 face mask.

Swine flu has come to our School! However, there is no vaccine to protect its virus. How do we protect us from it?

One possible version

Swine flu has come to our School! However, there is no vaccine to protect its virus. How do we protect us from it?

We advise that you should wear face mask and avoid going to the crowded place when you go out. We remember not to be in close contact with the patients infected with swine flu. On the other hand, the best way to stay away from this virus is to wash your hands often, and make sure that you have enough sleep. At the same time, we should do more exercise so that we can build up our body.

We are sure that we must overcome the threat against swine flu as long as we take proper measures and insist on taking exercise every day.

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注意：1.信的开头与结尾已经给出，不计算在总词数内。

2. 字数要求: 120左右。

人口膨胀population expansion;过度开发overdevelopment。

Dear editor,

Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world.

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Yours truly

Li Hua

One possible version

Dear editor,

Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world.

With the development of industry and agriculture, cars make great noises and give off poisonous gas. Because of population expansion and overdevelopment, resources has become less and less. Trees on the hills have been cut down, and waste water is being poured continuously into rivers. The whole ecological balance of the earth is changing. Massive destruction of environment has brought about negative effects and even poses a great threat to man’s existence.

We must face the situation that exists and take actions to solve our environmental problems. We hope that all these measures will be effective and bring back a healthful environment.

Yours truly

Li Hua

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低碳经济下的环境保护之一

“低碳经济”是一个具有广泛社会性的经济前沿理念，最早是在2003年英国政府发布的能源白皮书《我们能源的未来：创建低碳经济》正式提出的。低碳经济包括低碳发展、低碳产业、低碳技术和低碳生活等经济形态，是指在不影响经济发展的前提下，通过技术创新和制度创新，降低能源和资源消耗，尽可能最大限度地减少温室气体和污染物的排放，实现减缓气候变化的目标，促进人类的可持续发展。

Protection of Environment

1. 目前环保还存在着许多问题。

2. 为了保护环境，3. 各国政府做了大量的工作。

4. 我的看法。

One possible version

There are still many problems of environmental protection in recent years. One of the most serious problems is the serious pollution of air, water and soil. the polluted air does great harm to people’s health. The polluted water causes diseases and death. What is more, vegetation had been greatly reduced with the rapid growth of modern cities.

To protect the environment, governments of many countries have done a lot. Legislative steps have been introduced to control air pollution, to protect the forest and sea resources and to stop any environmental pollution. Therefore, governments are playing the most important role in the environmental protection today.

In my opinion, to protect environment, the government must take even more concrete measures. First, it should let people fully realize the importance of environmental protection through education. Second, much more efforts should be made to put the population planning policy into practice, because more people means more people means more pollution. Finally, those who destroy the environment intentionally should be severely punished. We should let them know that destroying environment means destroying mankind themselves.