勒索...！
《潘德尔的巫师》
17th century English related witchcraft superstition is extremelyserious, many everybody because are accused but to suffer in vain forthe sorcerer the fatal disaster. This small story is Zhan Nite abouther whole family pitiful bitter experience narration. Zhan Niespecially told this story the time is in 1634, at that time her onlythen 9 years old, because are actually accused to imprison for thesorceress in the Lancaster castle jail. Before this her maternalgrandmother, the mother and elder brother are all treated as thesorcerer to execute.
《哈姆雷特》
Shakspere (wrong spelling) created Hamlet--a man with wisdom and courage .In order to revenge on his uncle for killing his father, he pretented (spelling mistake) to be mad and suffered a series of misery. On the contrary, we can also say that Hamlet is rude and selfish for he did not think twice before his revenge . if (Capitalize "If" since it is the beginning word of the sentence.) a country has no king, how can a country keep alive (You need a question mark here since it is a question.) So, every thing has two sides, the bright side and adumbral side. Every time we make a decision we have to think twice.
Comment:
Be careful with your spelling, grammar, and punctuation. Too many uncessary mistakes.
It is good that you looked at both the dark and bright sides of Hamlet. Thats quite objective and convincing 。
《小公主》
What a brave and kind girl! She is a rich family's princess,her father really love Alice ago,However, once her father had something wrong in the accident,so the teacher was cruelty to Alice,but I find that the Alice is very brave and outgoing,she never said someting scared or something bad,she just continue and grow,soon,a mircle was that Alice get a friend of her father,so she could get a good life and start a happy life again,yeah, Alice is a good princess, As a little princess, she didn't hate nobody even her teacher a terrible miss. At the moment, I just want to say that something you should insist,a good sentence,All road lead to the Rome,and Everything is possible, she can be a severnt from a princess,but after she insist,so she become a princess again, I like the girl-Alice.

the
story
was
written
by
Vicry
in
America.
it's
about
a
freak
who
was
named
Joseph
Maric
,he
was
half
elephone
and
half
naked.
He
had
works
in
a
freak
show,but
he's
a
innocent
monster，and
he
loved
the
other
nomal
human.
Although,the
nomal
human
were
all
hate
him
,laughing
at
him,beating
him.
Unbeliveable,yah
had
thought
he
shall
slaied
everybody
in
this
story
for
revenge，and
became
a
powerful
demon.
这个故事是由在美国维佳利写。
这是关于一个名叫约瑟夫玛丽克的怪物，他有一半的电话和半裸。
他在一个怪胎秀的作品，但他是一个无辜的怪物，他爱其他人正常。
虽然，正常人都恨他，嘲笑他，打他。
难以置信，你以为他要slaied报复这个故事大家，并成为一个强大的恶魔。
I
looked
a
book
in
the
summer
holiday.The
book
called
<<The
Elephant
Man>>.
This
book
tell
about
a
poor
and
ugly
peaple.No
one
like
him,eveeryone
all
mock
him.Because,he
is
very
ugly.There
are
more
bags
of
dirty
skin
on
the
front
and
back
of
his
body.The
right
hand
is
like
a
marls
foot.But
the
left
hand
is
beautiful!A
people
close
him
in
a
cage.And
show
him.Until
one
day,a
doctor
looked
him.He
feel
the
Elephant
Man
very
interested.And
want
to
study
him.So
The
Elephant
Man
famous,everyone
want
暑假我看了一本书。这本书叫做<
<大象人>
>。这本书讲述一个贫穷,丑陋的人。没有人喜欢他,eveeryone都嘲笑他。因为,他很丑。有袋的肮脏的皮肤前后他的尸体。右手就像一脚泥灰土。但左手是美丽的!一个知情人士透露他在笼子里。并展示了他。直到有一天,一位医生看着他。他觉得象人非常感兴趣。,想研究他。所以著名的“象人”,每个人都想要的