写作思路：要直接简化任务语言。在叙述中，我们要把直接叙述变成间接叙述，尽可能简化人物语言。这样，即使情节连贯，又使语句“简练”。

In the winter holiday.I read a book.It is very wonderful.Its name is "The monkeys paw".The book tells about the Whites and a paws story.Mr.Whites friend gave him a small and dirty paw.He said "It can makes your dreams come true.But youll feel unhappy."Mr.White wanted ?3000.

And after some days,he got ?3000,but his son deid.The end is Mr.White and his wife were very sad.

I think“The monkeys paw”is very useful.Because it tells us some important things.Such as "get something for nothing." is impossible.We must do every things by ourselves.And we must know learn by doing.

When I was 10 years old.I was not good at math.And I had tried to find many escape solutions.But no one is good for me.My mother tolds me,"learn by doing",and I did some test questions.Now,my math is ok.I think my story likes "The monkeys paw".And in the new future,I will do every things by my self and do not rely on my father and mother.I know I am the best.

What a nice story!“The monkeys paw”is perfect，and I will learn more and more in it.

译文：

在寒假里。我读了一本书。它非常棒。它的名字是“猴子的爪子”。这本书讲述了白人和爪子的故事。怀特先生的朋友给了他一只又小又脏的爪子。他说：“它能让你的梦想成真。但你会感到不快乐。”怀特先生想要3000英镑。几天后，他得到了3000英镑，但他的儿子戴德。结局是怀特先生和他的妻子非常伤心。

我认为“猴爪”是非常有用的。因为它告诉我们一些重要的事情。比如“免费得到一些东西”。这是不可能的。我们必须自己做每件事。我们必须知道在实践中学习。

当我10岁的时候，我不擅长数学。我试图找到很多逃避的方法。但是没有人对我有好处。我妈妈告诉我“边做边学”，我做了一些测试题。现在，我的数学还不错。我想我的故事就像“猴子爪”。在新的未来，我会自己做每件事，不依赖父母。我知道我是最好的。

多好的故事啊！”“猴爪”很完美，我会在里面学到更多。