写作思路：先表达自己态度，然后再讲述主要故事内容，最后表达自己明白的道理。

范文：

This is a foreign masterpiece. This story content is very wonderful , lets person have feeling very much after read it.

这是外国的杰作。这个故事内容很精彩，让人读完后很有感触。

This story has given an account of a little girl Mary who was self-abased has become a lively , open and clear , clever girl's process. During the period of this, she has known Diken and Colin.

这个故事讲述了一个小女孩玛丽从一个自卑的女孩变成一个活泼、开朗、聪明的女孩的过程。在此期间，她认识了迪肯和科林。

 Colin was a disabled ,but he has finally overcome difficulties and saw the sunshine again with the help and encouragement of Mary and Diken . That lets me feel Mary is a nice girl ,because she can correct mistake, she is also eager to help people .

科林是一个残疾人，但在玛丽和迪肯的帮助和鼓励下，他终于克服了困难，再次看到了阳光。这让我觉得玛丽是一个好女孩，因为她可以纠正错误，她也渴望帮助别人。

Diken is a kind-hearted boy , because he went to give food to Colin when Colin was able to build again , he certainly is also a child lively and actively. 

迪肯是一个善良的男孩，因为他去给科林送食物的时候，科林才得以重建，他当然也是一个活泼好动的孩子。

But Colin and he are completely different , Colin always gets angry, slightly no satisfactory will be furious.But he also has merit. He is a persistent child , insists walking every day.

但是科林和他完全不同，科林总是生气，稍微不满意就会大发雷霆。但他也有优点。他是个坚持不懈的孩子，坚持每天散步。

They three are just like one family, in harmony cheerful life of three people. I also admire Mary very much , because she has given Colin courage , happiness and confidence . 

他们三人就像一个家庭，过着三人和谐愉快的生活。我也很佩服Mary，因为她给了Colin勇气、快乐和信心。

Having read this story ,I understood that carrying through firmly is victory no matter what we do.So we must work hard for our dream.

读了这个故事，我明白了无论我们做什么，坚持到底都是胜利。所以我们必须为我们的梦想努力工作。